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Ref.: Baikal pencil_colo by Paranoid-line Ref.: Baikal pencil_colo by Paranoid-line
Like a good freind of mine I also plan to enter the OCT of Chernobyl Curs.
So this is my character:

Name: Baikal

Breed: Porcelaine [link] X Smooth Collie (sable-white) [link]
Body anatomy is Porcelaine but markings and details like furr or the ear comes from the collie.

Age: 6 years

Gender: male

Abilities: The red colored parts on the legs, the mouth and the tail are furrless and protected with an liquid toxic. It had an special effect on every individual animal. This force can be minimal like: dizziness or could also be an constant effect like: paralysis (paralysis could also be temporary)

Strength: Versatile, ingenious, fast. Baikal is an obscure opponent.

Weakness: He can't hear good, cause he had just one ear to adjust the direction of sounds and/or voices. It's also easy to snap on his long tail even if he tries to get him away. (It's not a snake wich could bite back) The weakest points are his furrless parts on the legs, the tail and even at the mouth. He get's easy flesh wounds, but remember that this parts are toxicated and your dog will receive damage after a few minutes. Baikal can also be toxicated by the substance, but it's easier for him to handle the consequences.

Personality: Baikal is an clever boy with many tricks and an attentive mind. He is an strategic and prescient (reads bodylanguages, mimiks and so on) person. Most times he tries to be optimistic but it fails mostly, so that he gives himself back to his pessimistic thinkings.

History: Baikal is the son of an old male Porcelaine and an young female smooth collie. His parents are outcasts and belongs to no one. He got his name from the Laike Baikal where he lived for his first months. In this time his parents recognised that the beloved son got the curse of Chernobyl and send them back into his unknown home as soon as he could look after oneself.

likes: gleamy and shiny things/ paper/ rustle

dislikes: water/ fire/ open fields/ noise

Other: has no left ear/ extrem long tail/ 56cm tall and 28kg heavy

Partner:
Name: Fény
Breed: depressive an suicidal firefly
Abilities: She isn't allow to fight with him. But if she get shocked by someone or something she sends a big flaslight wich gives everyone who see this an flashback for a few seconds! So please be free to use her abilities for interisting actions.

charactere by me
outlines: [link]
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Kysan Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
das is ja mal sowas von cool
der is voll süß
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Paranoid-line Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2011
lol vorsicht er ist giftig ;)
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Songdog-StrayFang Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2011  Student Writer
Welcome to Chernobyl Curs! Companion is a suicidal firefly eh? That's a new one.

Oh, I'm a little confused. What do you mean by "Baikal is an obscure opponent"?
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Paranoid-line Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2011
Thx a lot for the welcome.
Yeah I thought a long time about his partner ant this little swirling/fluttering thing was perfect for me.

With obscure I mean that he is hard to read. Most he seems to be uninvolved or desinterested so as example: if he says something its not even clear if its good or bad/ important or unimportant. (same for his body language, its hard to read)
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Shinkoryu14 Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Alright, here's our review

One thing you need to keep in mind is that things like being smart and strategic are personality traits, not strengths, and should be listed under "personality."

We're a little confused by your description of him as "prescient." Do you mean he has the power to predict the future, or that he's just good at reading his opponents and guessing what they'll do based on body language? This point needs to be clarified.

We're also curious since you mention it's easy to cut him on the fleshy parts where his poison is, if the poison got into his bloodstream through a cut would he be hurt by it as well?

Finally, we'd like some sort of visual reference for Fény and a little more clarification on her ability. You mention that she creates a burst of light when "shocked" does that mean when she's startled or only when she's truly frightened? And does this effect everyone in the area (including Baikal) or only a specific individual?
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Paranoid-line Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2011
Okay. In first place I'll list smart and strategic under 'personality'.

Second: Prescient means that he reads body languages. I'm sorry that this question comes up, but I thought if I didn't write it in 'Abilities' it's clear enough. (I described it a little bit better now.)

Now to the poison:
If the poison gets in his bloodstream or he lick his wounds he is also be infected by his toxic.

Fény will get her own reference soon, so you will read all points of her and her abilities in this. I just wanted to make an short description of her, so that you'll keep her in mind.
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Shinkoryu14 Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Alright, your character looks balanced so we'll go ahead and add your reference to the group. Just remember to mention under weaknesses that his poison can effect him if it gets in his blood, and that until we get a ref for Fény that we can't accept any audition pages.

We look forward to seeing what you come up with.
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Paranoid-line Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2011
Clear I changed this.
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