Baikal_Audition_Page1

First comes first:
songdog-strayfang [link]
talked to me about the placing of my text. It was hard to read and after an conversation she was so nice and gived me help with this.
We asked the Tournament manager befor this so don't worry it's not against the rules. I'm sorry for the favers/watchers 'cause I also decided to separate the sites.

I'm not sure what to do with the next round (if I get into) so maybe I'll use speech bubbles or seperate the text from the illustration. For this Audition I'll take it as it is now. I'm sorry if you've got confused or something else.

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So it startsin prypyat!


Page 1
Baikals little firefly Fény guides him through an damaged road. I used brown shades for bilge facades and wallpapers. There is also more for the street themselve because I wasn't sure about her material and only grey seemed bland for the composition.

Even if these little bug doesn't seem to be suicidal... of course she is! Please remember no one is everytime the same behavior but you feel her deep emotions. So you will by Fény (I hope...)


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I.Audition End [link]


story & charactere belongs to me~
text placing (and better speech): [link]

Reference:
Baikal coloration - [link]
Baikal outlines - [link]
Fény coloration - [link]
Fény outlines - [link]


Questions and constructive suggestions are welcome, don't be shy!